So I started looking back on some of the writing that I've done. Hell, some of it's not bad. While this one is my current favorite, it's much more something that would be better done in Austin, and there's a lot more story there to go. It's this one that holds some promise.
It's not quite ready as-is. There isn't enough to go on as to where either the woman or "Tom" comes from, and it might fly too close to the Terminator franchise for comfort. And I don't really like the way it ends, not completely.
But it's got the bones of something there.